Awwww thats sad but a great poem 5/5 but its really sad i hope it not true and if it is im so sorry keep it up =]

* $heila *

Wow.. that was powerfull and really deep.. must say.. thats the best i've read today.. and i too hope thats not true.. but anyways.. its a wonderful piece.. made me feel and reached inside.. loved it

keep up the great work
5/5

~Wake~

Gosh. that is sooo sad. like the others said..i hope its not true. cuz i get real emotional when a kid moves on. but this is really good and its emotionally powerful. keep it up

ayshley

5/5

Wow that was like really good keep up the work

5/5

blake