Wow Jeannie. Very intense piece. Made my heart beat faster reading this. Hair on my neck was standing up..lol....Excellent job!
Take Care Love Cindy

Oh what a great read this was! Conveys the very fear of hell....

Miss Jeannie,

This was the first poem I've ever read from you, whereas I thoroughly enjoyed reading. It presented the vampire's myth spectacularly well in macabre and aesthetic details, and was written with a touch of Edgar Allan Poe's distinctive poetic flair. Intensely nightmarish to say the least. Oh, wasn't I intrigued.

:)

Take care,
Marian

Very well done and descriptive .... I like the whole aspect of the vampire theme....wanted to try one myself....maybe someday....excellent, eerily beautiful.....vivid, scary