Awwwww baby i love you!!
miss you tons, and this is a really amazing poem, its amazingly written and really well thought.. and for a first poem travis, youre really talented.. good style and all.. keep it up hunny

Wonderful job!
I loved it so much!
you really captured this emotion and made it yours
wonderful!
5/5
kaila

OOO what a meaningful poem, very deep yet it left a lot of room for interpertation too i think...anyway great poem especially for your first ^_^

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This is a really good poem.. i liked the way your words flow into your emotions so well! Your a talented writter and i hope to read some more of your poems soon...if you have time you should go and read a couple of my latest poems...i would love to know what you think....thanks and keep writting...

Baby.. see youre such a good writter.. nvr ever dout yourself ever!!
i beleive in you.. and the comments prove that you can do anything!!
i miss you like crazy.. and i soo proud of you!!

Love it great job keep it up!=]

This is great..dreams are a beautiful thing. never let go of them!
i especailly love the last line:
"never forget it as it may be what saves you"
that's very powerful.
great work here!
oh i'd also like to take the opportunity to welcome you to the site. hope you enjoy it here!
and keep writting. =]
--Viola