by TwiztidJuggalette Jul 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She lives in a world, |
by Veamm
The start and ending fit out right...i enjoyed it very much...you really grab my attention..that why ill give 5/5 |
Great poem. it's easy to read and flows well. it's very sad and you convey the emotions well. |
by Sherry Lynn
Again another sad piece. You write with such ease about the pain. You draw the reader into your poem as if though they are actually there witnessing the whole scene unfolding. |
I understand completely what your going through. |
by Cella Bella
Great depth and emotion. The poem itself is very powerful and touching. The flow for me seemed off in a few places, but no big deal. Still 5/5 |