by just me Jul 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
The girl showed him the class picture |
by *Charisma*
I LOVED it...it was beautiful. Your last stanza was the only one that didn't seem as outstanding as the rest, but as a whole, the poem was great! |
by pixie
This is so wonderful.... it's not "rusty" at all. i put new stuff up- comment sumof mine please? |
by Cindy
This is truely a beautiful piece you have penned. The imagery is great. |
by Chelsea
I really like this one. its written wonderfully well. not rusty at all. perfect. keep up the good work. |
by letmebeyours
I loved this poem...it wonderful when u find the one who proves that he is different 5/5 |