Love it keep it up!+]

* $HEILA *

Its cute.

Very nice I loved the flow and your style. The rhetorical questions really engaged me to read and ponder. You have nicely written it with a nice flow...just dnt bother about the category, a poem is a poem :)
5/5
Fsams

The repetition is really powerful and effective,
i love it 5/5
xxx