Comments : Pulse

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is really a very unique poem, very strong words and very nicely expressed.

    I aimed to stay there all nightlong,
    make sure your heartbeat still stayed strong.
    But upon knowing you were at peace,
    I slipped away, back into sleep.

    loved this stanza.

    great poem dear

    all the best and take care