by Blaketooken Jul 30, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
Sitting in the shower using all of my tears |
by 19Rusty
This is a good beginning poem. It has the start to become more than it is. What I want you to do is put as much detail possible, use every emotion that comes to you, if it is sad, expand on it and make it deep. You have the potential to write great things. |