Nature's law

by sara   Jul 30, 2007


The Sun again appears
as all those recent years
The new day comes ahead
but nothing new instead
The Skies are blue and high
with greyish clouds inside
The Water fresh and pure
so sweet, though insecure
The world is combination
of more than man's invention
It seems that change appears
too late for human tears
Within the life itself
its hard to be yourself
To judge and feel with heart
is sense of undervalued art
Obey the nature's law
and live in self-control.
Despite this sounds so old
just trust the nature's law!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Too true.... Nice poem with a strong concept penned excellently.

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    OMG,such a awesome poem
    I am inspired
    Well done my friend
    5/5 is less
    keep it up
    I loved each and evry word so cant even say fav lines
    Just awesome
    brilliant

    tc
    your new friend
    Rohan

    And you can see my inspirational poems too or any other

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    You know your poetry well, everything you've written is true. Keep it up .

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautifully Shattered

    Very true

  • 17 years ago

    by Dr of Bishonomics

    I really liked this poem, it flowed well and said what it had to say. keep it up xx

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