Hey you know this one..is actually really good...it hs some truth in it aswell as we all strive to do what we want and at the same tym like you said that we can be strucctured we can also be a mess sometimes!!

gr8 write
keep it up

Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

Wow this is a great poem, great emotion 5.5 keep it up :]