Comments : Glasses

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very cute and true. Love is found in our heart before we can give love to someone else.. ahem anyways. I loved this, your emotion was wonderful.. and your rhyming was great, it helped a lot with the flow...

    Love is devoid of lies and deceit.

    You had me running to the dictionary on the word 'devoid' lol..

    Overall it was pretty darn good.
    (Capitalize those " but's " lol..)

    Great Job

    5/5