WOW, Great Job 5/5

Wow Jenni! I loved this one. Haha It reminds me of some things... x.x I absolutely LOVED this stanza:

Finally he slowly enters her
Taking her from deep within
How can something so good
Be thought of as such a sin?

Especially those last two lines! Amazing! I got such images and I just had to laugh at my dirty thoughts. Great job and I'm using this title for the contest. :]
5/5

Ciao<3

I Loved it! Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love it! Nice work!

Wow! the climax just nailed it all....that was unexpected and certainly blew me off...amazingly written :) 5/5