Hearts Intwined

by TakeWhateverMay   Jul 30, 2007


When you hurt.
He feels your every blow.
When your distressed.
He knows your every woe.
It's hard to hide.
These feelings of mine.
Especially with herts intwined.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Awsome,i loved your poem(5/5)
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  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very amazingly written
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

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