Comments : The First time

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Awww this is a cute poem. I like it alot. nice job :)

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Awwww. this was a really cute poem.

    my internet had a hiccup, so i dont know if i ended up getting my other comment through.

    this poemreminds me of every love scene that ends happily. its something i want to cuddle up with. =]