The pain

It is good but it isn't excellent. I like the topic but you could to describe emotions better and this piece should be deeper.

A feeling that most of us feel at a moment in our life, and that mean its not life, but the ppl sharing it, who make the life hard for each other.

keep it up

I like your poem in totality. The structure is very beautiful and I like the word choice. You keep your poems well written and I like your poems :)

5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

I liked the end of the poem last line I know i must 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.