Personal Torture

by aDORKable x3   Jul 31, 2007


Written 1.24.07
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Her eyes could stare back at you -
But what do they really say?
Do they tell you of her personal torture,
That she has to endure each day?

Of all the pain she keeps inside,
Of all the deceit and lies?
You couldn't tell by looking
Really deep within her eyes.

She has learned to hid it so well -
So one day she can move on.
But somehow she knows she can't,
And she knew that all along.

She wants to run, but she cant';
The lies, they keep her trapped -
Like an animal inside a cage.
When she misbehaves, she's slapped.

She hides the bruises under some powder,
And paints some color on her face.
She wants so desperately to find
Someone so the pain is replaced.

Hiding behind her makeup are deeply hurting eyes -
They just want someone to see them and finally realize -
That all the pain can stop and the hurt can go away,
If someone would come save her and take the pain away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    You put a lot of emotion into this poem and it was really deep you did a excellent job 5/5 <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem isn't original but it is well written. Title is excellent, first stanza is my favorite one. Second stanza is also great. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved this! It was really well written and the final stanza tied it together perfectly. A few things I noticed though, in the third stanza "hid" should be "hide" and in the fourth; cant` just has the apostrophe on the wrong side. Heartchuu.

    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow i no what you mean except im not a girl but nice poem loved it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.