by aDORKable x3 Jul 31, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Written 1.24.07 |
You put a lot of emotion into this poem and it was really deep you did a excellent job 5/5 <33 |
by Nix
This poem isn't original but it is well written. Title is excellent, first stanza is my favorite one. Second stanza is also great. 5/5 |
I loved this! It was really well written and the final stanza tied it together perfectly. A few things I noticed though, in the third stanza "hid" should be "hide" and in the fourth; cant` just has the apostrophe on the wrong side. Heartchuu. |
Wow i no what you mean except im not a girl but nice poem loved it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |