Wow i no what you mean except im not a girl but nice poem loved it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

I loved this! It was really well written and the final stanza tied it together perfectly. A few things I noticed though, in the third stanza "hid" should be "hide" and in the fourth; cant` just has the apostrophe on the wrong side. Heartchuu.

5.5

This poem isn't original but it is well written. Title is excellent, first stanza is my favorite one. Second stanza is also great. 5/5

You put a lot of emotion into this poem and it was really deep you did a excellent job 5/5 <33