by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Jul 31, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
The smooth round face of yours, |
by nikki
It was amazing. the way you expressed it was just beautiful. the structure was perfect, the image your words gave me was so strong. nice work 5/5 |
Very unique. I like it. |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a wonderful poem.. I like the imagery in it, well done. I last stanza. I think to improve this.. try to add 'emotions' in it.. |