Jeannie
What a beautiful yet sad piece. I could not pick a favorite stanza. They are all awesome.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

Very good piece. you have such a magnificent wording to all your poems. I don't know how you think such deep, complex thoughts to make such beautiful poetry. It's just unimaginable to me!
Charisma*

Oh jeannie, if the heavens were to fall, you could catch them with your words...

Miss Jeannie,

I'm utterly enchanted! How you've weaved your words to form this poignant work was very, very spectacular. I enjoyed the plaintive ambiance and tone of voice of this piece; plus, the sensory images were awfully touching. A delightful read.

Take care,
Marian