Um I love the concept of the poem it is short and well penned just a quick suggestion dont repeat the word trice maybe you can repeat it twice but not trice,

thats all buts it is good

Gene Ross

Very cleaver twist in this poem and its all good

Another sad one. I know how it feels to want to leave after something like that happens. Grea job with this one.
5/5
Ciao

It is a sad poem, but it's brilliantly done. I quite like the idea of the poem and the title was very...I don't know how to say it. It just captured my attention.