by Kris
Love it! |
by Erika
Wow! That's so different from all the others, and so beautifully written! You have a way with words that puts images in my head when I read them, which is what poetry is meant to do. Another great job hun! Love Erika |
by Jaymee
Beautiful. Imaginative. Creatively written. Kudos Dennis! You have the craft, a style unlike no other. You inspire me to try writing my own poems! 5/5 |
by Diana
This one seems to be missing something, or maybe it was just how I read it. Someone's been hurt? Maybe just in their dreams? I do like the way it was written many different ways to express emotions and feelings. And I like how you decided to portray the sadness. Maybe it's not sadness I am hearing when I read it though lol. I don't know honestly, but I do like it :) |
by Jackie
Exceptionally written hun. Being a floral designer, I could feel the gentle swaying motion of the poem and smell the sweet fragrance of the rose. Life does imitate art! 5/5 |