I like this too, youre a brilliant writer i must say! i love the way you repeated the single words on the next line, it made the poem flow well. another great job :) |
by collin
A good write i must say even though you let out a little bit of what is next you follow up with some vivid detail kudos |
That's so like deep ....i like it lol sorry i didnt no how else to explain it... |