Love can be the greatest thing and it can also be the worst thing, funny how emotions can be the worst pain ever felt. amazing poem 5/5 GG23 |
by jyzka
Wow such a great poem... having the greatest love but sadly ending it up!! love it! |
by ECILA ice
I like how you repeat the lines to come up with your title and emotions you were bearing, it doesn't affect with the flow. it was nice and the emotions were there. Keep it up |
I think maybe you could have put this one into stamzas but then again maybe not its fine the way it is. it was sweet in the begining then sad! well done |
by claire
If it werent for the title, the sad ending wouldve taken me totally by surprise - v v bittersweet, and frank. 5/5! |
by claire
This gives such a vivid image and i love that its free verse and classic without being cliche. i read this a long time ago so sorry if i already commented! |
Its funny are greatest ability is are worst enemy emotions sometimes can be so fickle - raindrops 5/5 |
by khate
Its such a really nice poem,love can be the greatest thing and it can also be the worst thing,i really love it,. |
Very good write. You've showed your emotions beautifully in this poem. I could almost feel exactly how you felt as I read this. The flow was good, and the word choice was great. The concept was beautiful as well... 5/5 |
by noha
Realy beautiful well done, again its nice flow and simple words but show how deep feeling inside, i know how its hurt and i know that all girls cant forget anything happend specialy things about love,5/5 |
by Goodbye
Love can be sweet and bitter. I really understand you feel.. Poem very beautifully written. |