Comments : Stranded love

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Love can be the greatest thing and it can also be the worst thing, funny how emotions can be the worst pain ever felt. amazing poem 5/5 GG23

  • 17 years ago

    by jyzka

    Wow such a great poem... having the greatest love but sadly ending it up!! love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I like how you repeat the lines to come up with your title and emotions you were bearing, it doesn't affect with the flow. it was nice and the emotions were there. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I think maybe you could have put this one into stamzas but then again maybe not its fine the way it is. it was sweet in the begining then sad! well done

  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    If it werent for the title, the sad ending wouldve taken me totally by surprise - v v bittersweet, and frank. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This gives such a vivid image and i love that its free verse and classic without being cliche. i read this a long time ago so sorry if i already commented!

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Its funny are greatest ability is are worst enemy emotions sometimes can be so fickle - raindrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    Its such a really nice poem,love can be the greatest thing and it can also be the worst thing,i really love it,.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very good write. You've showed your emotions beautifully in this poem. I could almost feel exactly how you felt as I read this. The flow was good, and the word choice was great. The concept was beautiful as well... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Realy beautiful well done, again its nice flow and simple words but show how deep feeling inside, i know how its hurt and i know that all girls cant forget anything happend specialy things about love,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Love can be sweet and bitter. I really understand you feel.. Poem very beautifully written.