Comments : The one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Good poem, i thought it was kinda short and that was a shame cause i really liked where it was going... none the less, it was a great poem
    but one thing i think u might wanna consider changing is
    "To not kiss and tell"
    to
    "not to kiss and tell"
    it means the same thing, but it has better flow
    keep writing, ur awesome