by Roxiee An Jul 31, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Many stories, still unwritten |
by Kelly
Rele nice poem great job! |
by HiDDEN TRUTH
VERy qOOD. PLEASE READ & COMMENT MiNE. THANKSz 5/5 |
Very deep and nicely written, I like it from the beginning to the end. I just don't like the repetition of the word "now" in the fourth stanza because that ruins the flow of the piece in that part. All in all, great job! |
Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions.. |
by danielle
Well writen keep it up nicely done |