by Angel Of Broken Hearts Jul 31, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
As I lay here in the dark, my thoughts are scattered to the night, |
by Cody
It had a very intresting rhyme scheme but I enjoyed the over all effect it gave and it was full of emotion as all true poetry should be, but I will not allow you candle to go out and you know I'm always here for you |
I like the structure of this and the whoel thing is great all around, you get a 5. |
by all or none
I liked the poem its good i liked the way you compare life to the flame |