Comments : The Candle

  • 17 years ago

    by all or none

    I liked the poem its good i liked the way you compare life to the flame

  • 17 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    I like the structure of this and the whoel thing is great all around, you get a 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cody

    It had a very intresting rhyme scheme but I enjoyed the over all effect it gave and it was full of emotion as all true poetry should be, but I will not allow you candle to go out and you know I'm always here for you