Poor thing, it is so clear that you have been hurt so much by this one person.

I believe that by writing it releases more pain and anger with each sentence allowingus to find a path of recovery.

You have done a fine job in displaying your emotions.

--Sher

All the poem i have read on yours are worded brilliantly, i love the motion and feeling put into this poem particularly xox
5/5 from me
xx

Wow. the words in this were absolutely amazing. the way you expressed it was awesome. you have such a talent. 5/5

You are so full or talent. keep it up i love this one too..

The repetition in this, was strong.
The emotion's powerful.
Your style is amazing, I really like how it flows:)

Your talented,
Keep it up.
5/5 Elly.

I feel that this poem is not finished yet. There is a lot of emotion into this poem.
I miss the flow.
But it is a good poem.