I love this one I know for a fact that it does have true feelings and emotion every word was meant for real
i totally give it a 5/5
one of the best i think
its amazing what you can think of at 5 am lol
well great poem. You have TALENT . =]

laura

This is oretty good.
I think you need to work on the structure though.
Your flow was kindof overpowering, but other than that it was a good poem.
great job!
5/5
((Amber))

WOW I LOVED IT I UNDERSTAND YOUR EMOTION AND IT COMES FROM YOU HEART GREAT POEM 5/5

Ok look i am going to be completely honest... the poem was good the structure bad.. if you want to catch peoples attention you have to fix your structure.. you need stanzas and lines what you have is a paragraph that rhymes(sp?) . i give it a 4/5 cause it was good but yeah like i said it needs to be put more into a poem form

Still jealous.
Like majorly.
:]
5/5