by BeautifulDisaster Jul 31, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
{this poem means a lot to me. its the dream, well i guess nightmare, ive been having since the begining of the summer of 2007.} |
Wow, this is seriousky a great poem. It even gave me goosebumps. It's really great. 5/5 |
by tears i cry
Very sad and very good people do do this and alot of the time it isnt noticed very cute 5/5 |
This poem is so sad. And I feel like strangling that guy. Poor girl. Anyway, this was a nice poem. Very deep, heart-rending and tragic. 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
Well I like the ending of it.. Flow was okay, i really like the 'couplet style' well done. |
by Marius Laun
That was incredibly deep. I loved it. It was so sad . The way it flowed was great, and the way it was worded added to the emotion. IT was great |