by schylar
Thanks for the feedback. i'd rather have someone give me advice on how to improve instaed of telling me "great job" n stuff like that. i'll take what you said into consideration. oh yea, i have AIM it's Shortieluv313@aol.com. ~schylar~ |
by Dance Girlie
I like what's coming across in your words, but i couldn't find a beat. try to split it up, with a little more consistancy. :] |
Its great...keep it up=]p |
by Hebe
I like what you wrote. |
Great job!!! its really relateable it hurts when someone does that but you realize that if they could hurt you like that u deserve better anyway great poem 5/5 |
This is really really good |