by BrokenREALiTy Jul 31, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Life's rain is pouring down on you, |
Different but good. good job |
by Brittany
I really loved the way you ended this and I LOVED the content. It was a real eye-opener piece. |
by Debbie
Nice write. The poem itself is akin to an excitable rant of emotional steam. It reminds me of a confused someone, yet is still able to think properly, especially in difficult circumstances. The pitch and rhythm set off vigorous pace throughout, which is seemingly forceful; and the emotions raw and well versed. An interesting read. |
by Kaila
Very nice |
by AntiSocial16
Beautiful |