Amazing poem
makes me sad to read it tho...
good job

Ashleigh

Keekee!!!!! hehe! OMG!!! yea it makes me sad but... at the same time it makes me happy! because it is so beautiful!hehe i no that sounds lame but... i really loved it great job<333333

-Haii

Wow that shows a lot of emotion! the ending really makes the poem great! def 5/5. keep it up!

Hey Keenan,

Holy crap this is a REALLY good one it has lots of meaning and get's a point across.... I loved it it's GREAT!!!!

Beck

Keekerrs,

What a stunning success you have written. How sad. In a sense, living as a nobody--so to speak--is quite a wonderful concept, whereas living without a soul is quite a gloomy thought (and life). You've portrayed a nobody's feelings and thoughts quite well. Yet it's paradoxical to note how this piece revealed languid sentiments when it was supposed to be a portrayal of the soulless/emotionless. :) A pleasure to read, as always. All the best and take care!

Debberrs ;)

Keenan
its kinda long but its really good and i like it it is how you are though it raelly suites to your lifstyle i know i cant spell ok leave me alone but i still like the poems were you can feel and not alone in the dark (well thats just my opionin)

Apey

Wow..

5/5

YouR poemS giveS aN extrA pleasurE anD differS tastE of readinG. KeeP uP youR writinG bY servinG 'EXHILARATING' expressionS.....

luzaN

Wow, I think WOW. Incredible poem, my favorite stanza is last one. This piece is so honest and you expressed how you feel powerfully. I enjoyed reading it, you are so talented. Atmosphere of this one is superb, truly outstanding.
Well done!

Keenan,
this I really like this.
The flow was flawless, and it had a dark aura about it. You created a bone chilling peice.

Well Penned,
--Elly.