by Synh Jul 31, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Think of me, |
I personaly believe that you can do better, this one has an inconsistent flow due to some long syllabic lines. And the fisrt stanza seems little forced and the grammar also sounds odd. You can make it better 4/5 |
by Goran Rahim
This was truly a greatly written poem as it made me cry remembering my past days, |