Lonely

by Synh   Jul 31, 2007


Think of me,
Think to that day
Before we said good-bye.
Remember back to when
You promised your heart
Was forever to be mine.

Recall those days,
The ones filled with rain,
When you promised you'd never leave.
Were those promises
For real or
Completely empty?

Imagine us
So long ago
As gay and carefree as the wind.
Do you not recall
Those days when
We never gave in?

Now you're scared,
To love again,
To trust someone with your hearts' key.
But I promise you
That you can
Trust your heart with me.

Why must you
Back out now
Before we could set sail on the sea.
I never thought that I
Would be here
Hopeless and lonely. . .

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  • 17 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    I personaly believe that you can do better, this one has an inconsistent flow due to some long syllabic lines. And the fisrt stanza seems little forced and the grammar also sounds odd. You can make it better 4/5

    tc

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This was truly a greatly written poem as it made me cry remembering my past days,
    you have done a great job and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

    keep up the great work cause you are so great.