Comments : Can't wait forever*

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Lexi,
    i like your poem alot.
    but dont give up.
    if you like him that much,
    then dont let go...
    true love waits.

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This is an okay poem. im guessing you are a beginner. so i have some suggestions for you.maybe putting your poems into lines instead of paragraphs would help them make more sense. and try to keep the same rhyming pattern the whole poem. im sure you will become a great writer if you keep on practicing!!!! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    It's nice to kno how u felt abt diz boy. When a girl found true love, it's hard to get rid of it when try to move on but never went fast to disappear the feelings and it is always wondering if could start over or wish never happen to end. I totally understand ur poem is abt. You're pretty young and still got long way to go.. Never kno a guy is out there want somebody like u. Your feelings will be stronger when you feeling better and happy. So keep it up!