This was perfect . Wow . You really grabbed me with the first stanza . Your rhyming was good; at one point it seemed force, but it still worked well . And the ending, was just ... It wrapped the whole thing up .

Applauded (:

..__MiNDYY

Wow very well penned nive rhyme and great flow

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You're right, I love this. :)
The flow was flawless, the rhyme scheme was nicely done, && the emotions were strong && powerful.

"And I'm sick of having pity,
For faded goals, or fallen dreams.
Maybe if I'd been more witty,
It wouldn't burst at the seams.

And now I just have to say,
This is becoming a bit much.
I'm getting number everyday,
It seems I'm really losing touch."

^ Lovely job. :) && I agree with Mindy, you ended the poem perfect. 5.5

- Stephyy <3

I loved the start to the poem - very grabbing with your first two lines. Liked the stanzas and the rhyming you used. Very sad poem - definitely been there before in my life. Fear is a horrible thing. Hope writing this helped you get over it.

Mo