Drink up my lies

by disturbed one   Aug 1, 2007


Drink up my lies

Ive called you four times,
But you were away,
Im sure you'll be back,
I'll try another day,

Its been three weeks,
Still no call,
Im tired of waiting on you,
I have feelings after all,

Im sure your at his house,
Boozin it up,
I'll show myself to the door,
Cause I've had enough,

Its okay, im moving on,
Ive found another girl,
You were sadly mistaken,
When you thought you were my world,

Dont tell me I'm crazy,
I can see it in your eyes,
Blood rushes past the sense,
Just keep drinkin up my lies

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If you dont understand the line "Blood rushes past the sense" i meant it like the bloodshot look in her eyes was more obvious then her senses, and i guess it could also mean the adrenaline rush she gets from being with someone that shes not supposed to be with.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Such a wonderful job. So much emotion and power in this piece. 5/5, Em x

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Fantastic job =]
    I really enjoyed the read =]
    5/5 Definately.

    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    No real need to explain the one line, i think it was phrase perfectly to capture what you were trying to portray..i love this, great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved this, I don`t know if it was personal to you persay or just an idea that sprung into your head..but it was still written on a personal sense, not only to you..but to the readers. Many of the people reading this will be able to relate and that`s a good thing. Your rhyming and flow were great and overall the poem was a really good read.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Awww this is reaaallyy good. Your poems are so better than mine haha. 5/5