by disturbed one Aug 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Drink up my lies |
by Em
Such a wonderful job. So much emotion and power in this piece. 5/5, Em x |
Fantastic job =] |
No real need to explain the one line, i think it was phrase perfectly to capture what you were trying to portray..i love this, great work! |
I loved this, I don`t know if it was personal to you persay or just an idea that sprung into your head..but it was still written on a personal sense, not only to you..but to the readers. Many of the people reading this will be able to relate and that`s a good thing. Your rhyming and flow were great and overall the poem was a really good read. |
by Jessie
Awww this is reaaallyy good. Your poems are so better than mine haha. 5/5 |