Awww this is reaaallyy good. Your poems are so better than mine haha. 5/5

I loved this, I don`t know if it was personal to you persay or just an idea that sprung into your head..but it was still written on a personal sense, not only to you..but to the readers. Many of the people reading this will be able to relate and that`s a good thing. Your rhyming and flow were great and overall the poem was a really good read.

5.5
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No real need to explain the one line, i think it was phrase perfectly to capture what you were trying to portray..i love this, great work!

Fantastic job =]
I really enjoyed the read =]
5/5 Definately.

-Ally

Such a wonderful job. So much emotion and power in this piece. 5/5, Em x