That was good. Even though you said that it was a random poem there was alot of anger in it and thats always nice to read too instead of all those love sappy poems

Happiness has turned into pitch black darkness,
Utter darkness - I can't see the light anymore,

^those two lines are so sorrowful..but written in such an incredibly good way. i LOVE it.
this poem was a bit random..as in a touch hard to follow at times..but regardless the emotion was expressed well throughout. good work! keep it up =]
--Viola

It may be random but it's sure was good. 5/5

xxMandaxx