Wow, that was the craziest image ever.
But it was beautiful. It's like I couldn't stop reading. Amazing descriptions, and even though there wasn't a consistant flow it was still beautiful.
Great job!
5/5
XxAmberxX

Omg!! this is so sad i too have many poems about child abuse and i think it's great that your really trying to help nice work 5/5
kaila

I think it's great you wrote this . Strong message . It imagery is just straight up and makes me flinch when I read it . Many of my close friends are friends with a boy who was killed by his mother due to child abuse . It sickens me . So this poem means a lot . There wasn't a consistant flow -- it got rocky, but I think you held a strong meaning and shoved the message right in the reader's face .
Well done
..__MiNDYY

I can very much relate this is a terrible thing to go through and i wish every person that has ever commited a crime like this go to the very depths of hell i know i come on strong and alll scary and stuff its just that this tradgedy has messed up my entire family...
great job making it aware and expressing yourself

I know her fear...and her pain.

ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE.

luzaN

Wow, tears in my eyes. amazing poem, ill deffinately pray for all those children