This was beautiful. And your flow was great not too overpowering.
The emotions were strong and I can see how much you loved you grandmother.
Great job!
5/5
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Almost brought tears to my eyes reading this cause it reminds me of my grnamother that I lost. She's been gone awhile but the memories and the pain are still fresh. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

You have put up you emotions very well....It shows how much you love your Grandmother....But the ending was really good...
Take care