WOW! i am so taken away by this poem.
it's beautiful in such a sorrowful way.
you really have made the reader feel the pain with your choice of words..
i liked this stanza the most:

A sharp pain on my wrist
A crimson river flowing fast
Again and again I feel the blade
Again and again the silver is stained

but really the whole thing took my breath away. Magnificent! and so very moving.
great work! =]
--Viola

oh and another thing if you EVER have a problem PM me. I'll try to help as best I can..
and stay strong!