Wahoo! Lol I guess this piece is fantastic and thrilling! The funny quality is maintained with great rhymes and rhythm.

Sex can flood your life with pleasures
Using your own precious treasures!

Wow this is an eye-catching line!

5/5
CmpImp

I loved it, it is so honest and true. the way you actually expressed the exact way it means was great. and it is true. everyone cannot do with out sex once they tried it. 5/5 great work. it has made my day, and i'm gonna show my partner. hope that ok.

Very honest, staight to the point, lol could't get better than that 4 a sonnet lol 5/5 keep it up

Lmao sorry i have to say i found this poem funny o.o it was probably your rhyming in it that amde it sound funny but yeah lol anyways 5/5 it was really good

This was a great poem
just like all of yours are
but i think it highly qualified as funny

the rhyming was good till
it came to last line

i do agree that the last line wasnt thought out all to well and

*****Synh, you dont have to be so rude about this work
i mean seriosuily

its just a poem and there is no need to be all overworked,
and you kno not all strippers strip for fun
they do it to feed there children to
not just the prostistuetes,
and the way you said that makes me think you might be one

just my thoguht

and i loved this poem

great job

5/5

This is cute and done "tongue in cheek" I take it? Good one for the fun and humor section....I understand why it's on this board though....lol........nice rhyming.....

Youre such a good writter.. omg i loved this one and its in my favs!!

Fsams
Cute and entertaining :) Too bad you could not have put it in the Humor.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Hm, well, it certainly WAS humorous.

I laughed at some of the inuendos[very clever, I must say]...
A few of the rhymes were, well, rather forced. And since this is meant to be funny, I suppose that isn't SO MUCH of an issue... But that this poem could be incredibly hilarious if all the words really... well, fit.

You should also consider revising the last stanza, cause it fails to do your poem justice.

Just some thoughts.
I'd give it a 4/5... Just because it needs some improvement.
All the same, sonnets are hard! I congratulate you for surviving one!
Yay! Haha...

Superb! Very Good! I enjoyed it. I love the hilarity of the whole thing.. Keep up the good work

LoL..That was pretty funny...Got me to laugh...

Sex is awesome, sex is funny
Sex can help you, give you money

^That was hailarious...

Overall 5/5...

I wonder what you were thinking when you wrote thismlol.
that was a joke...

again, you proved that you are such a great poem and the witness is that you can do any style, yet they are all perfect poems, keep it up as always.

a 5/5 fro me.

Haha very cute umm im not supposed to post in here but oh well it was funny i liked the first line

Lol this was pretty good. I enjoyed reading this, I imagine it was fun to write. I think the funniest part is that it's so true. By the way, the flow here was awesome. I do have one suggestion though, "Fill your life with sexy attention", maybe replace sexy with another word since the word sex is used so often and it sounds kind of wierd lol. 5/5

marcella

Lol, I love it. Last two lines didn't flow like the rest, but it's good. Lol, I'm sorry, but I just have to ask...why Fsams? Is that your name?

Hehe it was gr8!!.....sex i sawesome i must agree with you ahah...sex can have so many meanings:D
u said it very well in this poem:D

i would appreciate it if you would please read nd comment on some of my new poems aswell:D

tk care

I think there is a word you missed, think its the sixth or eight line.. i think it should read filthy rich, the flow woks better with it... but wicked effort, really enjoyed

This was quite funny, you did a great job.
I don't usually read explicit poetry, but you did a good job.

Wow yeah! It's so good how this is like a commercial for girls to become h o e s. Not saying a bad thing about life of that kinda of people. It was funny and very simple to read so enjoyable. Original for me.
Keep up 5/5

Omg... i read this one of yours before..
hahaha its soo funny.. n true lol
love the rhyming, and the theme haha
good one
<3ang