by Cherise Aug 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Freedom don't mean a thing |
by Not
I this fist stanaz was my fave but what really made me like this poem is the last line when you said that freedom don't me a thing..thats so true...keep writing...love always!! |
Very well done. I like the message of this poem. I found some grammar errors though, and you know how much I love those.;) |