Forever I give up on love,
it is not real.
You just get hurt in the end,
and nothing is worth it.
this part of the poem really stood out to me!
i think this was put together very well. it could have been better though! great job! i loved it!

Good poem
the last line really spoke to me
lol reminded me of my new poem lol
well of the title of my new poem anyways
well good job you wrote this wonderfully

Keenan

Very good! Like it's so raw. You problebly just wrote all out of yourself, being hurt. Lots of emotion in it. Very real. And had sad emotion also on it.
Keep writing! 5/5