Aww. Cute. It's a love poem, so It's so good how you talk about battle what goes on inside that person not blaming the other person just how hard it is work on a relationship or love itself and it's a battle we always/ (in this poem case) never can win. Brilliant! Maybe I got it all wrong but i understood so :)! Really enjoyed the deepness in this also.
Keep on writing! 5/5

Well this one really stands out. its beautifully worded and flawlessly flowing5/5

Tc
Fsams

It was a lovely poem simple yet the flow were smooth. yeah i agree in your last line there's no such thing as a happy ending story.

Great poem. The flow was absolutley beautiful and I liked the concept. I think a lot of people could relate to this. Nice job. Thank you for sharing.
5/5

marcella

Aww this is such a heartfelt peice, you portrayed lots of emotion. I loved the love and war oximoron, im sure lots of people can relate to thi peice - how your heart yearns for something that seems like a fairytale, coz many of ius feel like happy endings never occur. I thad a great flow, and was able to read easily! i great poem all in all.
5/5 from me!
xxx

Bloody Hell .. thats what i've got to say.. ;o
You're Bucking frilliant.. !! an amazing piece of work.. beautifully penned .. a marvelous write..Loved it !

Keep it coming :D

~Wake~