by nikki
Oh my god, like wow. wow, i am speechless. i don't know what to say, it was amazing. i loved the way you structured your words, they melted together perfectly, the words you used just blew me away and the flow was perfect. i have never read a poem on romeo and juliet and the way they would have been thinking. the concept of this poem was unbelieveable. my most favorite lines were these ones |
by aDORKable x3
Jeez Sheena, can you stop making me speechless already? You're gonna kill me one of these days ;) I love how you have the ability to write on such topics. You use words and rhymes that aren't cliche, like so many writers ((including myself)) use over and over. Your way to express yourself is amazing and truly a give. I love the line: And I shall love you, until I love no more. Just beautiful. Love them all!! |
by Teria
This is your best poem ever. Well, from what I"ve read. Lol. |
This is phenominal...probably my fav. You are a regulaer Shakespeare. I honestly am speechless. wow!!! 10/5 |
by Debbie
Good Heavens, Sheena, how sweet Disgrace is! |
Sheena, |
An incredible write...i usually try to mark an area of improvement but its hard to do that when its perfect...i love the incorporation of the quotes and dialogue, it creates a very real and vivid image of the story at hand--keep up the good work! |
by Prophecies In Kodak
I may not be speaking with you, But I will comment your poetry. |
by Tricky Daze
You're really succesful at that poetry forms..I can see you like changes and you know how to do a change in a good way |