Pressure .. feel

by collin   Aug 1, 2007


What do you do when the room stops sp..nn..ng
when you try so hard but theres never any w..nn..ng
you push so hard ..t starts to hurt
but everyt..me you get knocked ..nto the d..rt
.. look ..n the m..rror and what do .. see
.. see fa..lure all around and ..t consumes me
the room starts to sp..n and aga..n .. cant see stra..ght
.. fall to the ground but theres no escape
th..s pressure .. have ..ts all because .. dont know my fate
what am .. gonna be, what w..ll .. do, where w..ll .. go,who w..ll .. forget and who w..ll .. come to know all th..s pressure runn..ng through my head somet..mes ..t pounds so hard .. th..nk ..m dead.

The room stops sp..nn..ng and .. can f..nally see stra..ght ..m not gonna get far .. can see at th..s rate

when the pressure ..s gone ..ll be able to be free but.. when ..s the pressure go..ng to leave me ?...

"All these feelings of pressure make me strive to be the best person i can be push me to my limits and sets me free really if you like it please comment let me know how you feel about it im always up for some criticism and i like to know whats up about my poems"

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  • 17 years ago

    by Britta

    Hey...its me again! ok so why have you put all those dots in instead of the letters?...im confused, what does it mean...or nothing at all?...a great poem...really gets the message through!! anyway let me know!! Britt xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Very ..nterest..ng. :) Message me about the dots. Is it because it will make people comment and question or is there a hidden meaning? I really enjoyed the poem though. I'll give it a five.