I'm surprised. So far I havn't found a poem to really bug you about. I really like it. I supose I could bother you about punctuation and Capitalization. Mwa ha ha <---evil laugh. Try to put punctuation marks into words like I'm, I've, Don't, stuff like that. Capitalize I as well. I enjoyed this poem. So far you're safe....I will find one. >_< Mwa ha ha! 5<---Yay a five.

Very sad poem=(... but nicely penned.. the flow was good, and it was full of emotions...great work5/5 ... keep up the good work...*Melody*=)

Nice poem =]] It really reflects your emotions, and how you feel and stuff! But I think you're not the only one that feels like this sometimes, I guess we all do =] So I can deffinately relate to it ^^

5/5
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