Wow.. that was amazing .. beautiful piece of work.. gotta say that was the best i read today.. keep it up.. a nice start and a better ending ..
Great One..

Keep it up..

~Wake~

Great poem.
The ending was great.
A great, emotional piece of writing.
Take care

Wow I could 100% relate to this poem and so completely understood the character's emotions and how hurt a betrayal can feel.

"i changed...because u tried to change me
i let my defenses down... because of you
i let myself become blinded by love....just to have it thrown up in my face"

These three lines were simple and effective...to me they summed up the feeling of the poem. Brilliant work! :)